Raven

Commision for a newly developed card game.


Raven by ~yummy-twinkie on deviantART

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Neat! I do like the colors.

Although it kind of looks like you're nearing the end, I hope you don't mind some criticism.
It is kind of weird that she is not looking where she is pointing her gun. Nonchalantly killing civilians I guess.
But the gun as a whole is...kind of a mess. Thumb-hand area is too wide, fingers are too long, fingers aren't wrapping around the handle as you've drawn it, angle of the handle doesn't really match the rest of the gun...

And I guess as a personal preference I like the hair in the sketch better than the colored.

But as always, very nice overall, I hope to see more soon.

yummy twinkie said...

Ah it is a long way from being complete :) All the things that you've pointed out will be fixed when I do the actual rendering. The first colored pic was just me laying down the color scheme.